TEARS OF DEVOTION – SNIPPET 2

TEARS OF DEVOTIONFor anyone who likes dragon shifters, epic fantasy, and crazy action, here’s some more from TEARS OF DEVOTION. Book 1 (Land of Gods) is now in audiobook, so I want to share some of this one – probably my favorite book written to date.

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The sun hit the grass of the cascading hillsides in front of Lome as he approached the village walls. Shadows stretched over the bricks, concealing the cracks and crevices in the path.

From the top of a hill, Lome saw the village rising up along the mountain behind the walls. He could barely tell where the buildings stopped and the mountain rock began.

Warm air emitted from the walls like a blanket cast from the mountain to cover the earth below. Lome stopped to figure a way into the village, only then seeing the archers’ turrets and at least one pair of eyes staring down at him from above. A great drawbridge was pulled up, forming a flat surface with its cut rock supports. His instincts told him the walls should be centuries old, but they seemed pristine to the eye. Lome looked over it all with a hesitant thought to his past, a memory never there but never gone, from some other life perhaps.

The shadows had almost engulfed him now, though the sky seemed stuck in its yellow and orange transformation. As he passed a small vase overflowing with water, he heard an arrow being nocked into its bow.

“Halt!” a voice called out. “Announce yourself!”

As Lome returned no reply, a young man’s face poked out from a murder hole along the wall, his longbow aimed at Lome’s head.

“I wish that I could!” Lome yelled up. “But you see, I have forgotten such matters, and—”

“Aldrin?” the man from the wall interrupted. “Is that really you? Where’ve you been? Get in here quick, before anyone else notices you!” The man’s head disappeared from behind the wall, which shortly began to shake. A moment later, a secret door opened at its base. “Come on now.”

Lome considered the new name, figuring it was more likely his than Lome. At least, this man seemed to think so. The man motioned again.

“Thank you,” Aldrin, formerly Lome, said. He entered, slowing as he passed the guard, part of him suspecting a trap. But the guard simply closed the door behind him and smiled.

“You had us worried,” the guard said.

“You’re not the only one,” Aldrin replied.

The man motioned for him to follow, then turned and quickly disappeared into the shadows. Aldrin looked around and followed, ducking his head to avoid the low doorway. He was not short, but he certainly wasn’t tall enough for crouching through a door to be normal.

When they emerged in an opening with light, the man from the wall turned and gave Aldrin an inquisitive stare. “What are these rags you have on?”

Aldrin looked from his blue rags to the white robe wrapped around the guard.

“Tandiar,” a woman’s voice said, accompanied by soft footsteps. The woman appeared from the shadows. “What do we have here?”

“Keep quiet,” Tandiar replied. “We don’t want the other guards hearing this. I found Aldrin here walking outside the city walls, and in this odd clothing.” He turned back to Aldrin. “Her quarters are nearby. We’ll get you properly outfitted again.”

The woman, apparently in her early forties, looked Aldrin over. “What were you doing outside of the gates? You shouldn’t take such needless risks.”

Aldrin stood still, confused. What made it so unsafe out there? But he figured it better not to ask, for they seemed to know him and he wasn’t sure if he wanted to give up the fact that he’d lost his memory. Not yet, at least.

“It’s a good thing I found you when I did.” Tandiar laughed, slapping him on the back before leading him from the room. “Mirdal’s place will have to do. Don’t forget about your date with Platea tonight.”

“How could I?” Aldrin said in complete confusion.

A small mud-brick house appeared before Aldrin, and Mirdal soon had him in one of her husband’s robes. Aldrin looked at the brass shield serving as a mirror on the wall, staring at the cloth hanging loosely around his limbs.

“Aldrin, let’s go!” Tandiar called out. He stood in the doorway, having changed into a chartreuse toga that fell to the leather-laced boots on his feet. Over his shoulders, he wore an animal skin, although Aldrin wasn’t sure from what animal. It was almost enough to make him laugh, if it weren’t for the fact that the two were now dressed in a very similar fashion.

“I suppose I’m ready,” Aldrin said.

“Great, I’ve been looking forward to this! Ah, but you look grand! Platea will be a lucky girl, and whomever her chaperone is for the night, I pity them for the worry you will cause!”

Tandiar took Aldrin by the arm, and they laughed as they walked through a low hallway, although Aldrin was only laughing along so as not to seem odd. A breeze blew through the toga he now wore, and he became acutely aware of the lack of undergarments beneath it.

The streets had mostly emptied in the time it had taken to prepare for the date, but oddly, the sunset seemed to have not changed one bit. Groups of men and women sat smoking pipes in front of quiet inns, and a pleasant cherry scent carried with the wind.

“Don’t worry yourself, friend. Platea is a wonderful girl. I mean, it’s the second week, so you should be at ease by now.”

“Second week?” Aldrin asked.

Tandiar gave him a sideways glance as he pulled open an iron gate along the way. “You feeling okay?”

Aldrin decided he’d best not act suspiciously, so he simply nodded.

They passed under a bridge, and the path led them around a bend in the road. Soon they came upon a stream, which they had to step over.

Windows were barred in the houses along the path, and more than once Aldrin noticed guards watching people suspiciously.

“What are they watching for?” he asked, with a nod toward two guards passing by not far off. They wore the same blue and purple robes the other guards wore, curved swords tucked into their sashes.

“Are you mad?” Tandiar asked, making a point to look straight ahead.

The response was enough of an answer—don’t give the guards a reason. The ensuing awkward silence was soon over, to his relief, when Tandiar stopped at a low doorway framed by white curtains.

“Here’s where I leave you for the evening.”

“Thanks,” Aldrin replied, feeling utterly lost. “Just look for the girl by herself?”

Tandiar cracked a half smile, but shook his head. “Tonight, I can’t tell if you’re joking or not…. You seem off.”

He walked away, still shaking his head. This left Aldrin with nothing to do but enter through the door and see what sort of woman was awaiting him.

The door led first to a long hallway, with a cobblestone floor much like outside, and more white cloths draped throughout and hanging from the ceiling. As he went farther along, the sound of people talking met his ears, and then dishes clanging. Was that a lute?

The hallway came to an end, bringing Aldrin to a room full of people. A fountain stood in its center, presided over by a statue of a dragon. Everyone was dressed just like him, and barely anyone seemed to notice his arrival. Well, anyone except for the beautiful girl with the round, brown eyes. He took a step closer and she smiled, so he continued.

“You must be Platea?” he asked.

She smiled wider, “You always know how to make a lady laugh.”

He took the seat across from her and stared, wondering how it was that she so surely knew him.

“What is it?” she asked.

“Can I confide something in you?”

She nodded eagerly.

“I don’t seem to have all my memories,” he said. “I think something’s happened to me.”

“Oh, don’t be silly,” she said with a sideways, nervous glance.

He followed her gaze and saw soldiers along the walls, a few tables of people between them and him.

“Is that something we’re not supposed to talk about?” he asked, lowering his voice. “Why?”

“Aldrin, stop. This isn’t funny.”

“I’m not trying to be.”

The two stared at each other, and as each second went by, her brow furrowed further.

“God, you really have no idea,” she said.

He nodded slowly.

“Oh, my.” She leaned back, as if suddenly feeling dirty. “And do we even…. I mean, it’s possible then that I’ve just been set up for you. Oh, I feel sick.”

She definitely looked ill, but Aldrin had to keep the conversation going. He had a goal.

“I need to get up the mountain,” he said.

This time she gasped, a hand to her mouth. A couple of the people nearby had apparently heard, because they were glancing over as well.

“What?” Aldrin asked.

She leaned in, close. “You have to watch what you say, you never know when—”

“You!” a guard called, a man next to him pointing at Aldrin. “Hands on the table!”

“We’re too late,” Platea said. “Run!”

Chairs fell over as the two stood and headed for the door. More guards charged in from that way, so Platea pulled Aldrin in the other direction and said, “Stay close!”

She kicked a table over, inciting shouts from the nearby customers, then ran for a table by the wall which she used to jump up and through the window. Aldrin followed close behind, but someone grabbed his foot. He was yanked back and found a soldier’s face inches from his own.

“I don’t know what’s going on!” he shouted.

The soldier was about to respond, when a rock hit him on the head and he staggered back, releasing Aldrin. Platea appeared in the window with a second rock, this one for the soldier running at Aldrin’s other side.

“Hurry!” she shouted, and so he did.

Before the soldiers had time to realize what was happening, Aldrin and Platea were long gone. Platea led the way down the alley and then motioned for him to leverage an overturned cart so they could jump up onto a roof, and then climb over its edge to hide. He made it behind her as more shouting sounded below.

“Mind telling me what in the world’s going on?” he asked.

“Your bet’s as good as mine.” She took off at a crouched run, and he followed again.

“Where’re we going?”

“First, we have to get away from there, since they’ll be looking.”

“But why?”

She stopped at the edge of a roof, eyes searching like a hunted rabbit. “Because you’re an idiot.” She ran and jumped to the next roof over, then waited for him to do the same.

“I’m not jumping across that!” he said, his voice rising higher than he meant it to.

“Up there!” a gruff voice yelled.

Platea gave Aldrin an exasperated look and then took off running. Jumping to the next roof, she rolled and then lowered herself over the far side. He had no choice but to follow—it was that or wait and ask the soldiers why they were after him, and something about that seemed like a bad idea.

Three long strides brought him to the edge of the roof, and he pushed off with all his strength. Surprisingly, he cleared the gap with no problem. He didn’t hesitate as he quickly lowered himself over the edge. He was relieved to see Platea waiting at an open window.

“I knew you’d make it,” she said when he found his way in. “Over here.”

The two ran down the stairs, to the back door, and then sprinted across a small field to another house. This one had a locked door, but she climbed through the window and led him to a tapestry on the wall. He couldn’t help but pause at the sight of the tapestry—a picture of a boy’s body with a goat’s head.

“Is that reminding you of something?” she asked as she pulled the tapestry aside to reveal stone steps leading down.

He was about to say no, when his mind was overcome with a memory. Blood, a slicing sword, and spears everywhere… Then everything went black.


FROM JUSTIN >>>  Having a fun time trying to figure out how this fits into the rest of the story? Ooooh, I hope so – it’s a doozy. Good times. Anyway, we’re almost finished with the cover for my first Age of Magic book, and a portion of the draft can be seen now as my Facebook page pic – www.Facebook.com/JustinSloanAuthor. Come like the page so you don’t miss anything.

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